Thursday, September 21, 2017

One Alice Munro sentence


Alice Munro, “Runaway,” in Runaway (New York: Vintage, 2005).

Such a great sentence. Nine of its fourteen words form prepositional phrases, but the sentence moves as quickly as the truck, or the air. And notice that it’s air, not wind. The final seams is a bonus.

7 comments:

  1. love it. so vivid. such economy. which story is it from?

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  2. It’s from “Runaway.” (The details are below the sentence.)

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  3. The scientific name is the Online Oversight in Processing Syndrome (OOPS). It happens to me often. “Oh, there it is.”

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  4. Or better: Oversight in Online Processing.

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  5. :) or maybe I was mesmerised by That Sentence.

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