Thursday, August 20, 2026

Fortnite, Harry Potter, &c.

Natalie Wexler, co-author with Judith Hochman of The Writing Revolution, writes about how Alpha School, a private-school network that relies on AI instruction, teaches writing. Long story short: Alpha School borrowed (or co-opted?) the model of The Writing Revolution, known as the Hochman Method, and called it AlphaWrite:

It’s possible that AlphaWrite could do a good job of teaching writing. But the app’s creators have overlooked a crucial component of the Hochman Method: it’s designed to be embedded in curriculum content. AlphaWrite, in contrast, is ... “embedded in content that matters to students.” And the model assumes that the content that “matters to students” is anything but the content of the curriculum.

Instead, AlphaWrite encourages students to write about their personal interests.
AlphaWrite’s suggestions, for students who need them: Fortnite, Harry Potter, Social Media, Video Games, Basketball.

Imagine being the lucky teacher who gets to read those essays. Oh, wait — there is no teacher. It’s all AI.

Peg Tyre’s 2012 Atlantic article “The Writing Revolution” is still necessary reading for anyone who cares about the teaching of writing.

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