The caption for a photograph in The New York Times:
Ms. Hill’s closet in Washington. Like many people’s, it is filled with officewear she may not need for a while. At top right, a framed photo of she and her Congressional colleagues.“A framed photo of she”: yeesh. A simple fix: “A framed photo of Hill,” &c.
The other problem: the unintended suggestion that Hill’s unneeded officewear is hanging in closets hither and yon.
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Where are the proofreaders?
My sister recently wrote to the Washington Post to correct an error in the obituary of a man our father had worked with.
The WP obit said the man had led Outward Bound (a wilderness/leadership program).
In fact, he had led Upward Bound, a summer school program for disadvantaged kids, to prepare/encourage them to go to college.
I’ve taught Upward Bound (later TRIO) students!
I’m still annoyed with the Times for not correcting a photo caption that described Louis Armstrong applying balm to his “chapped lips.” No, not chapped. His lips suffered considerable damage from his playing the trumpet. He used a salve created by a German trombonist.
I sent a correction that included the description that went with the original photograph, taken by a Life photographer, not in the online Life Photo Archive: “Closeup of jazz trumpeter Louis Armstrong massaging his lips w. balm to keep them strong for playing his trumpet.” The Times never replied.
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