Monday, April 19, 2021

How to improve writing (no. 92)

I had to read the sentence a second time:

A couple of weeks ago around dinnertime, neither my husband nor I were in the cooking mood.
Jeez, that’s in The New Yorker, in print, for crying out loud. I’ll fix it:
A couple of weeks ago around dinnertime, neither my husband nor I was in the cooking mood.
Every writer slips up. I speak from experience. But see the sentence above, beginning Jeez.

Garner’s Modern English Usage on neither . . . nor : “This construction takes a singular verb when the alternatives are singular or when the second alternative is singular.”

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[This post is no. 92 in a series dedicated to improving stray bits of public prose.]

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