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Wednesday, October 12, 2022

Gabbard, Palin, Hitchens

I think this formulation works:

Tulsi Gabbard is the Sarah Palin of Christopher Hitchenses.

Or:

Tulsi Gabbard is the Christopher Hitchens of Sarah Palins.

I can see it both ways. Context here.

[I’ve already reminded myself, many times, that I once thought of Gabbard as a likely member of a Bernie Sanders administration. Good grief.]

A critical reader

I just cited Bryan Garner once again, so I’ll toot my horn — just once — in this post:

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I’m a member of the panel of critical readers for the forthcoming fifth edition of Garner’s Modern English Usage. What that means: I was given a chunk of the revised text to read and edit and comment on in whatever ways seemed appropriate. My chunk: from boyish to cigaret, which seems like a chapter from my life. I also read, edited, and commented on other entries that drew my interest. The work was an exhilarating, mind-stretching joy.
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The fifth edition of GMEU is available for pre-order from Amazon.

Related reading
All OCA Garner posts (Pinboard)

[Cigaret ? A “needless variant.” That chapter closed on October 8, 1989. And yes, “from boyish to cigaret ” makes me think of “from crayons to perfume.”]

As [+ adj.] a [+ n.] as

I was surprised to see this headline in The New York Times, not because of the question but because of the phrasing:

[The New York Times, October 12, 2022.]

From Garner’s Modern English Usage:

As [+ adj.] a [+ n.] as. In AmE, writers sometimes err by inserting of after the adjective. But good usage rejects this — e.g.: “From the sidelines, Nunez became nearly as good of a cheerleader [read as good a cheerleader ] as he was a running back.” Jaime Aron, “Westlake’s Nunez Leads AP Honor Roll,”Austin Am.-Statesman, 26 Oct, 1994, at C3.

The answer to the question the Times poses seems to be “Who knows?” Because “anything could happen.”

*

What has happened: someone fixed it.

[The New York Times, October 12, 2022.]

Tuesday, October 11, 2022

Angela Lansbury (1925-2022)

Nancy. Edwina Brown. Sybil Vane. Mabel Sabre. Doris Hillman. Myra Leeds. Eleanor Shaw Iselin. Isabel Boyd. Nellie Lovett. Jessica Fletcher. Mrs. Potts. Balloon Lady. Those are the roles I know her from.

The New York Times has an obituary.

Coronation with Zeppelin

I had a crown placed on a molar this morning. It’s a much simpler matter than a root canal: the dentist drills away the temporary crown, does some 3-D imaging, [mysterious gap], makes some small adjustments, [mysterious gap], and cements the permanent crown in place. In the mysterious gaps: the making of the crown and its placement in a kiln. Those things happened offstage, or at least off my part of the stage.

The strangest thing about my adventure in dentistry: the local radio station that plays in the dentist’s office played Led Zeppelin for at least half an hour or so while I sat in the chair. “Squeeze my lemon till the juice runs down my leg”: I never thought I’d hear that in a dentist’s office.

See also How to have a root canal.

[The lyric is from “Traveling Riverside Blues,” Led Zeppelin’s refashioning of a Robert Johnson song. And no, I’m not a Led Zeppelin fan, but I can recognize their music.]

“All of this together”

Konstantin Dmitrievitch Levin is happy.

Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina, translated by Constance Garnett, revised by Leonard J. Kent and Nina Berberova (New York: Modern Library, 2000).

Also from this novel
“The turning point of summer” : Theory of dairy farming : Toothache : Anna meta : “Brainless beef!” : “He could not help observing this” : “Official activity”

[The revised translation replaces roofs with roof, pavement with sidewalks, and doves with pigeons. So it’s puzzling to see dove in the fourth sentence.]

Fritzi at 100

From The Daily Cartoonist : “A Century of Fritzi Ritz.” Fritzi Ritz, later known as Nancy’s Aunt Fritzi, first appeared in the New York World on October 9, 1922.

Related reading
All OCA Nancy posts (Pinboard)

Monday, October 10, 2022

SCOOP: Musk’s next move

Jim VandeHei, Mike Allen, and Roy Schwartz, Smart Brevity: The Power of Saying More with Less. New York: Workman, 2022. 224 pp. $27.

Smart Brevity is neither smart nor brief.

The book, by the founders of Axios, offers a dumbed-down writing template that assumes an easily distracted reader: a six-word-maximum title or subject line, a strong single sentence (the “lede”), some context about why what you’re saying matters (the “nut graf”), and an invitation to go deeper. It’s the model behind Axios — though even Axios doesn’t observe a six-word limit for titles.

And because the reader is easily distracted, it’s necessary to write with bold text, bullet points, emoji, and illustrations. And only two or three sentences per paragraph, please. It all begins to sound like a recipe for gaining the attention of a defeated former president. And for gaining customers: an AI service called Axios HQ can evaluate your writing for you — or, really, for your company. Pricing starts at $12,500 a year.

At 224 pages, Smart Brevity is painfully repetitive: if you miss the first pronouncements that reading habits have changed but writing habits haven’t (uh, Twitter?) and that most people don’t read most of what’s put in front of them, fear not: you’ll find those pronouncements offered again and again. Indeed, you’ll find every idea repeated. Even anecdotes repeat. There are, to use the book’s language, “too many words.”

A far more helpful resource about writing for the world of work: Bryan Garner’s HBR Guide to Better Business Writing (Boston: Harvard Business Review Press, 2012). Far broader in scope, far wiser about writing.

[This post’s title is a sample title from Smart Brevity, which recommends the use of “a hot name or brand” in a headline or subject line.]