Argosy Book Store has an unusual copy of The Elements of Style for sale:
The book bears the ownership signature of Edith Oliver, the drama critic of The New Yorker, together with a slip reading “with the compliments of the author.” Enclosed is a typed letter from White, signed “Andy,” Brooklin, Maine, 8 May, 1959, promising to have the book sent to her for her “liberry.” In part — “One thing that tickles me about the little book is that I managed to use the phrase ‘the fact that’ (p. 40) after blasting the daylights out of it in two separate places (‘It should be revised out of every sentence in which it occurs.’) Ha.” In a holograph P.S. he writes “The smelts are running. What are you doing in New York when the smelts are running?”
Price: $2500.
But where is the mistake to which White refers? I checked the first edition, first printing, and there’s no
the fact that on page 40. Nor does the phrase appear in error elsewhere in the book. In White’s
The Points of My Compass (1962), a postcript to the memoir “Will Strunk” also mentions a mistake:
One parting note: readers of the first edition of the book were overjoyed to discover that the phrase “the fact that” had slid by me again, landing solidly in the middle of one of my learned dissertations. It has since disappeared, but it had its little day.
I can think of three possible explanations of what’s going on: 1) my reading skills are not what they used to be; 2) White is referring to readers who read the book in proof; 3) there’s some strange inside joke playing out. I think that 2) is the likeliest explanation.
In the introduction to
The Elements of Style, White writes about his tendency to miss
the fact that:
I suppose I have written “the fact that” a thousand times in the heat of composition, revised it out maybe five hundred times in the cool aftermath. To be batting only .500 this late in the season, to fail half the time to connect with this fat pitch, saddens me, for it seems a betrayal of the man who showed me how to swing at it and made the swinging seem worth while.
We all miss, but we keep swinging.
Looking at
The Elements of Style again made me notice anew details that mark the book as an artifact of the dowdy world. My favorite: “Is it worth while to telegraph?” I would like to see
Maira Kalman illustrate that sentence.
[Page 40, first edition, first printing. Thanks, library. Click for a larger view.]
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An afterthought (7:07 p.m.): I wonder whether
the fact that might have appeared on page 40 in the entry on
interesting:
Perhaps this sample sentence first read: “In connection with the forthcoming visit of Mr. B. to America, it is interesting to recall the fact that,” &c. This entry of course cautions against relying on the word
interesting.
Related reading
All
Strunk and White posts (via Pinboard)
[The telegraph sentence appears, still, in the 2009 fiftieth-anniversary edition of
The Elements, three years after Western Union’s last telegram. As of this morning,
The Elements of Style, fourth edition, hardcover, is #164 of all books at Amazon.]
