[Mark Trail, original and revised, April 28, 2014. Click for larger views.]
I thought of Robert Johnson’s “Hellhound on My Trail”: “I got to keep moving, I got to keep moving.” I thought of “Whoopsie!” and “Oops!” I thought of putting this thought in two heads. But I like better what Elaine suggested.
Thanks, Elaine, for your suggestion and for the use of your humormeter.
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Monday, April 28, 2014
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I agree that it's funnier this way. So unexpected, which is at the heart of humor, and what makes punchlines so memorable. This is good, very good.
Poor bear! :)
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