Monday, April 28, 2014

Mark Trail revised

[Mark Trail, original and revised, April 28, 2014. Click for larger views.]

I thought of Robert Johnson’s “Hellhound on My Trail”: “I got to keep moving, I got to keep moving.” I thought of “Whoopsie!” and “Oops!” I thought of putting this thought in two heads. But I like better what Elaine suggested.

Thanks, Elaine, for your suggestion and for the use of your humormeter.

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All OCA Mark Trail posts (Pinboard)

comments: 1

The Crow said...

I agree that it's funnier this way. So unexpected, which is at the heart of humor, and what makes punchlines so memorable. This is good, very good.

Poor bear! :)