[Mark Trail, August 1, 2015.]
“Any signs of anything”: ponderous. “In this area”: obviously. Mark has traveled into the Gulf of Mexico, where Mississippi Ken [sic ] and Foxylocks Kelly [sic ] have a dead shark on ice for him. Omit needless words.
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[This post is no. 61 in a series, “How to improve writing,” dedicated to improving stray bits of public prose.]
Saturday, August 1, 2015
By Michael Leddy at 10:55 AM