tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post8776978912126603316..comments2024-03-28T20:53:54.312-05:00Comments on Orange Crate Art: How to improve writing (no. 29)Michael Leddyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-13153753503737251872010-09-09T16:51:17.633-05:002010-09-09T16:51:17.633-05:00Never done, indeed, which is part of what makes wr...Never done, indeed, which is part of what makes writing online so attractive. Tweak, tweak.Michael Leddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-28095904890904625002010-09-09T16:47:43.610-05:002010-09-09T16:47:43.610-05:00Although he toils from sun to sun,
A writer's ...Although he toils from sun to sun,<br />A writer's work is never done.Other Elainehttp://elaineinarkansas.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-57435271139800738072010-09-09T15:41:45.240-05:002010-09-09T15:41:45.240-05:00Great changes.Great changes.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00695163891881011718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-77346737681597376582010-09-09T14:24:52.613-05:002010-09-09T14:24:52.613-05:00The more I look at this passage, the more I suspec...The more I look at this passage, the more I suspect it’s the result of several paragraphs being squished into one. Here at least, I see thoughtlessness rather than obfuscation.Michael Leddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-10627653725836926032010-09-09T14:18:52.718-05:002010-09-09T14:18:52.718-05:00You assume that the writer wanted to be understood...You assume that the writer wanted to be understood clearly. I think the opposite is true. These things are written that way intentionally. It gives the lawyers something to quibble over and it discourages actual users from reading the contract.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com