tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post2054595944942063663..comments2024-03-27T16:02:25.334-05:00Comments on Orange Crate Art: How to improve writing (no. 56)Michael Leddyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-32971860620275065972015-04-10T23:06:38.263-05:002015-04-10T23:06:38.263-05:00Well, sure, though moon v. moon makes a certain se...Well, sure, though moon v. moon makes a certain sense. I like the other revision better: eclipse v. eclipse.Michael Leddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-74264791565463650002015-04-10T21:48:07.158-05:002015-04-10T21:48:07.158-05:00"It’s dangerous to look at the moon during a ..."It’s dangerous to look at the moon during a solar eclipse, but lunar eclipses are always safe for viewing."<br /><br />One could argue that it would be more dangerous to look at the sun (as opposed to your moon) during a solar eclipse. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-50220841195023779762015-04-05T10:49:56.861-05:002015-04-05T10:49:56.861-05:00I don’t think this post is to blame. My guess is t...I don’t think this post is to blame. My guess is that someone realized at <i>USA Today</i>, the writer or an editor, took another look at the writing.Michael Leddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-52872494995438872452015-04-05T10:03:19.850-05:002015-04-05T10:03:19.850-05:00It could. I wonder why it was removed.It could. I wonder why it was removed.Slywyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01424323662407341123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-57916926270739710342015-04-04T16:22:55.388-05:002015-04-04T16:22:55.388-05:00So that could explain the repetition of eclipses,...So that could explain the repetition of <i>eclipses</i>, <i>eclipse</i>, <i>eclipses</i>?Michael Leddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05547732736861224886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8343608.post-19694724204057734602015-04-04T16:10:06.761-05:002015-04-04T16:10:06.761-05:00It looks like bad keyword-driven writing.It looks like bad keyword-driven writing.Slywyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01424323662407341123noreply@blogger.com